Timeless

Experimental/prose/story

Outside a light rain falls
Small drops form on the glass
To trickle down in rivulets
Eventually joining others on the leaves below

She sits in front of the window
Staring outward but does not see
Magic projections on the world before her
Imagined fantasies of the mind

It is here she smiles, sings, dances
On a swing beneath a sycamore tree
A sun dappled romance in bloom
Onlooking branches sigh in their approval

Gently he pushes her from behind
Her head tilted back as she laughs
Pulled to a stop, he bends over her
The swing forgotten as their lips touch

Her vision begins to shift and fade
Time is now at an end for today
Illusory panes begin to shut down
Another gray day to fill with dreams of tomorrow

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"It is here she smiles, sings, dances
On a swing beneath a sycamore tree
A sun dappled romance in bloom
Onlooking branches sigh in their approval

Gently he pushes her from behind
Her head tilted back as she laughs
Pulled to a stop, he bends over her
The swing forgotten as their lips touch

Her vision begins to shift and fade "
A beautiful romantic piece of art that is timeless indeed like the title with great vivid fantasy thinking about the beloved on a swing where it could be a metaphor for life ( the author's life ) and where her awaiting in patience might pay off but until then it is another gray day but still full of dreams. I felt the longing for that day and some sadness in the heart. Another awesome write...:)

[Rogue]

Thank you. I hid this one unpublished for quite awhile. Wasn't sure about it. Today, as I was going through, I decided to let it out into the light. I appreciate all your support, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I love it . You are the best in this style but that is only my opinion...:)

[Rogue]

Your opinion matters very much to me, my friend. Thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

The feelings are mutual . Gracie mille ...Shokran Jazeelan