Construct

Stream of Thought

Watching the time
Pass
on by, you are not
Wanted
to run wild and free in the
World
wide peace might just be a
Dream
of you and your wild, brown
Hair
balls and litter on the
Floor
to ceiling windows covered to
Hide
the pain that you are
Feeling
around blindly in the
Dark
days ahead provide
Cold
comfort indeed to the
Masses
of paperwork to get
Through
trying to make sense of it all

Author's Note

More experimentation

Reviews

[Cool Handless Luke]

I like it. I like the format and ease of flow and the reality of identifying with a piece on many levels!

[Rogue]

Thank you, Jeff. It was something a little different I was trying to work with. :)

[kelvin]

Nice read here from a nice construction there's always a point of starting it or making the creation in process and as always keep writing fellow writer. keep the experimentation going.

[Rogue]

Thank you, Kelvin. Always appreciate you reading and supporting my work. :)

[kelvin]

Your're very welcome and yes I support you fellow writer.

[Sami Khalil]

One word : AWESOME...:)

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha Thank you. That means quite a bit really. I figured this would not appeal to you. I am glad you liked it. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. A good one...:)

[Rogue]

Thank you, my friend. It's a bit different and I appreciate your support in my experiments. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)