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A Poem by Rodwonder
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It's not quantity, it's quality that counts...

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I am

A fugitive from myself

A ghost

The shadow in the mirror

Slight reflection

I am

The spirit

Lost in and without

A wisp

The glimpse

From the corner of your eye

I am

I will

I will be

© 2008 Rodwonder


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Lovely. Captured the wispiness of the moment. Sweetly penned. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breathtaking. So much expressed in so few words. I can never do this sorta thing... LOL I always write too many. Really fine work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is haunting and shows what can occur when we stop and look back. Your words are perfectly pieced together, forming and excellent poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awesome subject! great word usage, too bad you kept it so short and simple!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Really enjoyed this. Nicely written.


Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2008
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Rodwonder
Rodwonder

Mays Landing, NJ



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I've been a musician for twenty years, have had fair success at that. I have a passion for writing poetry, Sci Fi and some things a little scary... I'll write my poetry in metaphores and surrealistic .. more..

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