Reflection

Truth about what i see when i look at myself.

Reflection

Just wanna kill myself.-

Honestly.

Who's f*****g stopping me?

Under-prominence, i can see the world in an awkward scene.

Illusions taking over my opticals  and i can ramble on and no physical being can possibly see what i can see.

Who am i to be?- Who am i supposed to be?- 

Devil holdin' hands with Jesus, other hand is chokin' me.

Religion is  provokin', see?

Boats are made to float but, jee, one simple poke in the boat can determine if they float or sink.

A simple flaw can change it all, we're made with imperfections.

We're also made to build ourselves, but disregard directions.

I couldn't press a send button for you to get this message

and nobody understands a thing-

Except for my reflection.

Author's Note

What do you think of this? Do you agree. Im 16 and new to this. Message me if interested or email
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Reviews

[Rockstar Alvarez]

This is a great poem. I am usually very critical, but this is a great poem

[Utkarsh Singh]

alvarez a gud one ....... bt u seem to b a bit aggressive through your poem .....btw its a gud one ...keep wtitting