Cloud of thoughts

As my book of fate lies with you,
Decide what are you going to do?
Fill it with happiness,love,care and concern,
Or make me believe that your empathy is something i'll never earn.

It's funny how one's poison turns into another's wine.
Everything will eventually heal,all its going to take is time.
Give me just a little, a very subtle sign,
Of the ocean of love within your heart, a tiny drop at least is mine.

Reviews

[tk]

Okay, your cloud of thoughts here is as deep as an ocean. I've been pondering this just yesterday, about a man. He's the one I thought about while reading this. It's as if you've perfectly written my thoughts.. I love it when another writer seems to experience the way I feel and transform those feelings into words. I know I'm not alone now. This is simple yet delicate and spellbinding. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS.

[Sometimes Blood]

Profound
You write with such a depth

[Mary C]

this is a very clean and concise writing.. I really enjoyed reading!

[Niloufer Sultan]

thankyou :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

This is a great poem, I like the contemplation aspect and vision.

[Niloufer Sultan]

thanks so much :)

[Me]

I can feel the raw emotion in this write. This is very good

[Niloufer Sultan]

Thanks!!! :)

[Saddam]

Give me just a little, a very subtle sign,
Of the ocean of love within your heart, a tiny
drop at least is mine.

Amezinglly beautiful. Its really touching piece.

[Niloufer Sultan]

Thanks so much !!!

[Mari K]

This is good. The last line is a bit harder on the flow. Think perhaps,
Of the ocean of love within your heart, a tiny drop at least is mine. Overall it has a sweetness to it.

[Niloufer Sultan]

Much appreciated ! Thanks a lot :)!