Nothing but fear

I can't breathe

can't see

Feeling nothing 

but fear and pain 

I cower in the corner 

trying not to cry

while I'm waiting 

for my hangman 

to condemn me 

waiting for him 

to decide upon my fate 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

being debilitated by fear, the worst feeling...we can't move, can't function...we have no confidence left..
this is intensely sad.
j.

[Gabriele]

Powerful Poem, I can relate when I'm in the grip of Anxiety.

[Gee]

Tis our fate from our very first breath. We know not when or how but one day it will be our turn for sure.
Enjoyed reading you Robyn from Cologne.

[Robyn]

thank you very much :)

[Onlyme]

A sad and heartbreaking poem, of overwhelming fear and anticipation of dread. That really makes the reader relate to this person. Very emotional and upsetting.

[Robyn]

thanks, I tried to put all my heart in it

[Onlyme]

You can tell. It really does speak volumes. Such overwhelming emotions flood from this. Remarkable job you did. Congratulations on this.

[Chris]

Welcome to WC... Painting a desperate picture of a dark day.