A thought on eternity

This is about the temporal nature of things in the life of this world. We are dynamic creatures in a dynamic Universe. There is change and complexity. Enjoy.

Nothing

Is forever.

Not love

Not hate.

Not you

Not me.

Even the mountains

Which stand firm before you

Will pass away

Drift away

Like clouds in the sky.

Reviews

[Rachelle]

To spend eternity without change is stagnation.

[Frieda P]

So true, and bittersweet....the mountains do get to hang around the longest though. Eternity doesn't exist I suppose.

[Grendale Wolf]

Interesting thought. Thanks for the review.

[Frieda P]

'You're welcome, enjoyed it.

[Nims FallingDewdrops]

Nothing last forver its true. Everything is permitted here.
but essesnce of everything remains in us.
Everything will pass away one day.. Use of words is perfect.
And Piece is filled with hope and and tells to live before it leave
Great job!!

[Grendale Wolf]

Interesting interpretation. I'm happy you liked the poem. Thank you for your thought.

[:o]

There is so much truth in this. I think you are spot on with your thoughts. Well written

[Grendale Wolf]

Thanks for your thought on this poem.