You

You

A Poem by Vita Rose

YOU….

I had a dream last night I met you again…..

Deciding against the pain

Sifting through the pleasure

Arriving to the present

I had a vision I spoke to you again

Casting away the memories

Sailing through the mistakes

Arriving to the Past

I had a though today I forgot you

Moving Past the Past

Throwing away the Present

 

Approaching the Future

© 2014 Vita Rose


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Interesting poem, it shows creativity and deep thought. I do wish you would have given me more though, things like who you dreamed of? What was the nature of your pain and pleasure? If you leave to much to the readers imagination it is to easy for misinterpretation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Interesting poem, it shows creativity and deep thought. I do wish you would have given me more though, things like who you dreamed of? What was the nature of your pain and pleasure? If you leave to much to the readers imagination it is to easy for misinterpretation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'I had a though today I forgot you'

I think there is some kind of typo in here. I can't really tell what this line means.

The rest though is pretty good. It has a rather constructive format to it and flows well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very Nice and str8 to the point. Beautiful read.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 21, 2014
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Tags: ethnic, poetry, heart, romantic, past, future

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Vita Rose
Vita Rose

Washington, DC, DC



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I have always thought God was the perfect writer….somewhere between a poet and a reporter……fiction, nonfiction….analytical, humorous and studious…. Whether you are .. more..

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