So long

Poem written for the contest "Quote a line from your favorite song" The first line of this poem was taken from Modest Mouse (The Cold Part)

So long to this cold, cold part of the world
where storms of sadness sweep and swirl
and chill my body to the bones
I'm not so strong, nor made of stone

Goodbye to cutting bursts of pain
Goodbye to stinging sheets of rain
Goodbye to all the ones I love
I knew I could not rise above

all the hurt I feel inside
The torment I no longer hide
But you don't care, I have no doubt
So long, my dear, my time's run out

Reviews

[Ang]

WOW! This poem was very captivating. The flow of this piece was flawless...It was so effortless. I love the emtion in this poem. It is very sad but I love how you conveyed it so well. Great poem! :)