Ode to a Very Close Friend

Ode to a Very Close Friend

A Poem by Robyn

My mind was lonely, dark, and cold
before you came into my life.
The gloomy days would just unfold
and fill my heart with endless strife.
But then came you, you changed my world
and vibrant colors filled my day!
Oh darling, I want you to know
you gave me hope and light unfurled.
So now the truth to you I’ll say
Oh Prozac, dear, I love you so!

© 2010 Robyn


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having had to mess with SSRI's on & off in my idiosyncratic world-
i really find it very positive and enlightening how u used such wonderful
irony to express the savior of such stigma as a Love-Bravo!!! :)


Posted 14 Years Ago


I did not expect the end :o
Very nice write- you made the rhyming scheme seem natural and sewn into the structure smoothly.
Great little twist at the end. c:

-Coral-

Posted 14 Years Ago


funny how that little chemical clears it all up opens possibilities
a love letter to "sanity" so well written and so sweet

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like endings I don't expect, I love this .... good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


To animate something as though it has human qualities is something that is commonly practiced, and is always something that is nice to read about. This somehow paints a bleak picture for me though, as it kind of hints at a much larger problem with social conditioning and attachments, if not intentionally, than most certainly subconsciously. I liked the rhyme. It was surprisingly fun with the tone of this poem. Good job. Thanks

Posted 14 Years Ago


my husband got a new job . . . guess what I got?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very innovative and well-structured. A poem that takes you down one road and then suddenly goes to another road with completely different scenery. It is charged with sincere emotion, well done. This is a poetry pill.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Mia
Nice job, I really like it! You did a great job :) It really catches you on.

Posted 14 Years Ago


what a strike through with that last line!~ potent little poem that catches you off guard~well presented~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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