do you remember?

first love.

do you remember
when we first met
that’s one day
I won’t forget
I fell in love
with your bright smile
I stared at you
for quite awhile
when we spoke
it felt so right
your voice made
my heart take flight
I didn’t know
that’d be the day
you’d follow me
I’d lead the way

do you remember
our first kiss
our first sweet moment
in total bliss
my heart stopped
the world stood still
my knees felt weak
I felt the thrill
I didn’t know
from that point on
my love for you
would be so strong

do you remember
all the time
we shared together
love sublime
every moment
meant so much
every kiss
and every touch
I shared with you
my hope and dreams
you held me together
at the seams
all I wanted
was time with you
I’d never felt
my love so true

do you remember
when we last spoke
you said goodbye
and my heart broke
I thought you loved
I thought you cared
Did you not feel
the love we shared?

I should have known
you’d be the one
who’d make my world
just come undone

Reviews

[DamienHino]

awww ends sadly.... wonderfully written you took me along for the ride, I do remember. strong, lifechanging moment in my life!

[Miss Coral]

Excellent piece.. there are many poems on this piece, but not nearly as well done as this one was. Beautiful emotions expressed in this, great word choice, and a wonderful rhyme scheme. It was subtle, tight, and wonderfully consistent.

[Fran Marie]

A nicely expressed piece so beautifully penned ~
Nicely done

[Forever Mine]

I absolutly love this! This poem is easy to relate too, i actually do relate up untill the last stanza. Keep up the good work : )