flawless potential

impeccable
talent meets genius
music swells and bursts
and cuts through the stagnant air
the moment is no longer dull
creativity spikes
beauty radiates through
golden sound surrounds
music becomes my embrace

We are all waiting
for the moment
you break the silence
with all of your
flawless potential

                          pure magic.

Reviews

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

=D Very nice! Superbly described, each little detail carefully penned to draw the reader entirely into the image.

[T. Everts]

I love the style/formatting. cool

[alan peter kelly]

i am a perennial of potential...an abbott of costello...a bush in which to hide beside an ancient eucalypt...im always going places...catching buses all the while...as each dawn ache increases i must steel a little more for that day on the mirage known as horizon...with tiny wins to keep self consciousness at bay...and time colludes with weathered flesh no matter what the mind tells heart to say...still...i am a perennial of potential...and until it's time to pull up stumps / bite bullets / give up ghosts / shuffle off and be on my not so merry way...i'll plod the plot around the lot with carry bag of come what may...thank you for the inspiration...:)

[Bee]

really awesome and the way you wrote this just fit the poem perfectly. Nothing more to say. A big idea in few words. Really beautiful.

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful piece... I love the subdued tone towards the end.
This was one of the pieces that I just stared at in my contest, unable to make a decision, when I had to pull someone else in to help me.
Excellent write. I simply love the blunt style infused with emotion and visuals.
Great job.

-Coral-

[Ladysue]

this is pure magic...you start off really strong that draws the reader in and you continue through. there is such a wondrous beauty in here. I love the layers of thought in here...as the title says...amazing work...

[Adelia Alighieri]

You know, this so perfectly describes the emotion when you're about see your favorite artist perform live.

[luciddreamer]

pure magic indeed....great job

[Nancy S.]

impeccable.
talent meets genius.

I love this beginning. And what follows is as mellifluous as the subject at hand. Well done, Robyn.