The evil of the dark mind

My mind be a mind of shadow and gloom

not one person can reveal my thoughts untombed

the light you provide cannot reveal in my dark

this mind of mine is my mind of my own

not a single one person could ever have known

These thoughts I think tremble and weep

I lay her down slow, in her permanent sleep

never again will you think of me

Your breathing haunts me now, through the night

There is not a way that I could make things right

I haunt again, I move on to the next

she falls in my lap almost like its fate

little does she know, this is far more than a date

The voices inside tell me to put her to sleep

but finally I break down, spare her life, and take one last leap..

Reviews

[Inkeyes]

Love the obscurity! I enjoy what your not saying it lets the mind wonder. Good work

[Rob Santana]

Cool piece, right up my alley.

[KCNiemi]

I really enjoyed reading this. It was dark, and twisted(But in a good way). Great job :)