The Bridge
A Poem by
Rob Funk
The cars drive under,
The sound of thunder,
Soon I shall be under,
Cold soil cannot spoil,
Blood pumps,
Then I jump,
Dad said,
Never knew he was in the dumps,
© 2013 Rob Funk
Reviews
A wonderful poem!! The imagery, the emotion, the sound of this poem is incredible... I enjoyed it very much and like K.S.78 has said, it's very near to me as well.
Posted 11 Years Ago
"Cold soil cannot spoil"- Love this line. This was some really great writing and is very near to me. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
"Cold soil cannot spoil"- Love this line. This was some really great writing and is very near to me. :)
Rob, I like this one its quite dark, maybe you should change the ' He' to 'Then I Jump'--just a thought.
Will
Posted 11 Years Ago
Rob, I like this one its quite dark, maybe you should change the ' He' to 'Then I Jump'--just a thought.
Will
11 Years Ago
Good idea let me give it a shot real quick.
11 Years Ago
It reads much better, it puts a more personal touch to it. Keep writing.
Will
11 Years Ago
Thank you sir, you have reinforced m interest in writing.
11 Years Ago
We all need some support now and then. Been there.Keep well.
Will
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Rob Funk United States, PA
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Mostly I write to Heal, however futile the effort proves.
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