Dead Man Walking

 When it failed,

It seemed my ship had sailed,

Blue steel,

At least I wont feel,

Heaven or hell,

Who could tell,

Life such a hard sell,

And when He fell,

Upon His bloody face,

As he felt deaths embrace,

A feeble smile,

For I have gone the last mile.

Reviews

[K.S.78]

You really packed a punch with this poem, It is short but powerful. Great writing!

[Betty]

Strong Indeed!! " At least i won't feel heaven or hell" . Enjoyed the read very much!

[Rob Funk]

Thank You very much.