Cyclic

Cyclic

A Poem by IComeAnon
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The endless cycle that myself and my closest companions go through.

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Caffeine is the alcohol of sunlight

It gets me up

It gets me going

It makes me feel like I know what I am doing

It makes the headache quiet

Where alcohol is the caffeine of night

It gets me up

It gets me drunk

It makes me feel like I write alright

It gets the headaches started right

And Caffeine is the alcohol of sunlight.

© 2010 IComeAnon


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. ahhhh ... caffeine therapy ... beautifully written ...


Posted 14 Years Ago


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A good ole toast to caffeine! I'll drink to that.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it a lot.
I can relate.
The only suggestion I have is the last line doesn't need to be repeated. It takes away a lot of the poem itself.
Keep it up(:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 18, 2010
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IComeAnon
IComeAnon

Lake St. Louis, MO



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