Planetarium Dreams

I let go long time back

Floated down into the androgyny sea

Facing new types of me

And views of you too

And while they were watching us

I was watching them too

 

Can’t say im clear as the sky

It was raining on the moon tonight

And the man that was there waiting

Went back home

 

Pluto isn’t so lonely anymore

But the sun misses him terribly

I’m sure

I can see it when she glares

 

And in envy I see

I’m watching her watching me

And occasionally I visit the moon and see him to

On his mercury holiday

But like days the revolution comes to soon

He misses her and she misses him to

 

But Pluto waits cold and lonely

Cold shouldered by her farthest friend

But he loves her size and worm holes back the day

Kissing the light goodbye he goes

Leaving her grieving in her brilliant morning

Reviews

[Tree Bark]

great write, i love the topic

[J Kiplinger Young]

i like the piece, the imagery and ideas. i would work on how the lines flow into once another and connect

[Black-Draped]

sorry if you're getting tired of me reviewing =P
i really like the originality of the piece, poor Pluto =(