Threadbare: Confessions of a Useless Couch

Threadbare: Confessions of a Useless Couch

A Poem by Rliv
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You'd think I'd offer
Some kind of loving embrace
But my bones are bare

No muscles to hold you dear
I'm the skeleton
Of what you wish I could be

Rest your troubled head
But I'm not responsible
For sore necks and aching bones

© 2012 Rliv


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Interesting... that's the way the couch feels & I thought it was telling me something through all those hours of sitting on it... I never would have thunk it, good write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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it's intriguing how you put those together. in the beginning, you could even think it's a person talking to another : would in fact if there wasn't written couch in the title !!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 6, 2012
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