My Funeral

A kind of depressing poem I wrote depicting the true loneliness I feel inside my own head.

The things I would want at my funeral seems to me quite clear,
The loving sorrow of my family�"
The guilty audience of my peers.

I would like to burried with the ones that understand me�"
The ones that filled my thoughts as a subconscious family.
The ones whose existence and presence prove symbolic phoniness.
So I could truthfully know the peace of loneliness.

Author's Note

First post, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Ren Grace]

Deep like the ocean. Awesome

[Rockstar Alvarez]

:).........................