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A Poem by RivkaZ
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All tragically true

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 Careful, dears or I'll give you the slip

A penny for orchids and two for your slit

I'll promise you wonders

and bring only woes

I'm not who I seem

Beneath my clothes.

 

Send me a carriage at the corner of sixth,

And I'll write you a letter for the first time we kissed.

I'm only half-dreaming

I'm not really here

Just a second-hand dandy

and crocodile queer.

 

One for your money

Two if you show

Three if you're ready

By the time I go. 

© 2008 RivkaZ


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Gorgeous poem, I just finished an essay on (the wonderful) Oscar Wilde and then stumbled upon this piece. I feel exstatic. This is tragic beauty, and the age you wrote it in is beautifully captured. I loved the lines

"Just a second-hand dandy
and crocodile queer."

I can't believe this has yet to be reviewed, Kev


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's like a poem composed my the sympathetic devil himself :D!

I like it!

A.M.



Posted 16 Years Ago


Gorgeous poem, I just finished an essay on (the wonderful) Oscar Wilde and then stumbled upon this piece. I feel exstatic. This is tragic beauty, and the age you wrote it in is beautifully captured. I loved the lines

"Just a second-hand dandy
and crocodile queer."

I can't believe this has yet to be reviewed, Kev


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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RivkaZ
RivkaZ

McMinnville, OR



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I'm not actually sure who I am at the moment- I'll get back to you. I'm TRYING to be an 19 year old college student majoring in German and/or Creative Writing somewhere in Oregon planning a career in.. more..

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