Never let anyone call you Ugly ever again...

This is a little something I did for a wonderfully special girl whom I want her to see herself how I see her. However, the poem can be applied to anyone who has not seen their true beauty. Enjoy!

You claim your past has made you what you are.

It has made you think you’re not beautiful, my bright little star.

Even when such pain screams from afar.

You find your emotions as thick as tar.

 

So tell me, my bright little girl.

Why do you cry when the world is yours?

Look at it, it even does a twirl.

All you have to do is smile, and it will open its doors.

 

Red agrees and so do I.

That you’re so beautiful, and lie I cannot even try!

Your body, a sculpture made from the hands of God.

Do not be distraught by those whose minds are flawed.

 

Eyesight cannot lie, and my eyes saw what they see.

An island made from your eyes, lips and skin, all of it so pretty.

You felt hurt, and your pain hid away your beauty.

But it is still there, proven by your so-well-shaped booty!

 

You may wonder why do you not see it yourself.

It’s because it is hidden under the thorns of pain.

You have forgotten about all that you have but to gain.

Everything that makes you beautiful lays patiently above the tallest shelf.

 

 

At some moment, you might forget about my words.

About everything I've felt and said.

About how I saw a Queen where you but saw a servant hanging on a few chords.

At some moment all I've said may give way to dread.

 

But know now that within my heart I saw the most beautiful of all women.

Eve, dancing alone in this Paradise.

The one who signed onto me the most fateful omen.

Alas my girl, are there no more ways I can this surmise?

 

Oh fateful female spirit, doth take my soul.

For it was stolen by the most beautiful of smiles.

And now never again it shall be whole.

She took it without even realizing at all that they were just trials.

 

May the one whom it was written for.

As a swan, who has seen me before.

Roam the world with newfound strength.

Immortalized, by her beauty’s length.

Now be free, of what has brought her curse.

As the true woman, whose beauty bursts.

 

Author's Note

Surely, reviews are always helpful.
If you think you can give me some tips or something along those lines, it will be appreciated.

Reviews

[Monochromes]

Thank you for reviewing my poem! I really appreciate it, and so I felt it'd only be fair if I read some of your works!
I really like this poem because it approaches an issue, and the grammar is amazing.
The rhyming is spectacular! I was reading it aloud and a lot of interesting things caught my eye, but all in all I find this very uplifting in a sense. I'm sure your friend is very beautiful! Great work.

[Number Six]

Thank you for giving back the favor!
I'm pleased that you were able to enjoy it as much as my beautiful friend. Thanks for your time!

[Peach]

It's entertaining, neat and splendid. I admire the unique words and the surprising ones.

[Number Six]

Thank you very much for your review. Creative words have always been a favorite. I shall give back the favor whenever I can.

[The Gothic Tortoise]

Oh whoah, this one's so true, there are so many women out there that suffer in order to be prettier that they never see that they already are beautiful, i really like this one, nice job :)

[Number Six]

Thank you for your review :J
Indeed, I feel like many girls believe themselves to be ugly usually for imagined reasons.
I'd definitely love to prove them wrong, haha!

[The Gothic Tortoise]

Well, sadly the only one able to get them out of that low self-esteem prison is themselves, there is no way around it, most of them believe they are ugly so badly that they will never listen to anyone that tries to tell them they're wrong