Little Star

Little star, little star
Way up in the sky
You're shinning bright
With all your might
I just can't say goodbye

When morning comes
It brings the sun
To carry you away
But I can't take it
I'll miss you so
I'm begging you to stay

I see a light
That little light
Beginning to grow
The time has come
To say good day
Sadly, you must go

Author's Note

I guess I'm really missing my grandfather, who died from cancer a month ago. Comment what you think!

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Emmy, you reached my heart and brought a tear on the first verse.

Forgive me if this is one of those times that I should say nothing and smile.
But I hate being that kinda person. If I care which I do I can't be quiet
Is it me? did I read it wrong or do you want to fix this part:
But I can't take this
I'll miss too much
I'm begging you to stay

Other then that it's another one of your beautiful dances with words.

[Emmy]

I love getting advice! Thank you! I've been having trouble with that part for a while actually. Any ideas?

[Cryingkate]

Awe Thanks so much. I love your work and I bet you are quick to the draw to publish things as is. I do that a lot.
So yeah I got ideas but I know you do too. I am fully confident you can fix it better then I can. I am just a sounding board you are the Master of that piece of artwork. It's awesome.
have fun with it :-)

[Emmy]

Haha thanks, and I'll do my best;)

[Cryingkate]

In that case, The world must step aside cause Emmy's on the winning side :-)