Winter's March

The cold bits her nose
And nibbled on her toes
And still she keeps on going

The wind whips her hair
The others stop and stare
And still she keeps on going

It seems all is gone,
All reason to go on,
And still she keeps on going

For no matter what is lost
In winter's freezing frost
She'll keep on looking forward

Reviews

[Tom]

A poem about courage and endeavour, a sterling write Emmy imaginatively penned!

[Emmy]

Thank you!:)

[Baban.A.A]

hello, I trust this piece was really amazing, and to let you know I am assertive in my reviews. the poem was so meaningful, to me it was about being adrift, aimless, and amiss. what is interesting is that she does not know where to go or maybe doesn't even know the way but still ignores and backs off the attentions on her and keeps going. I very much liked it and well done, but if you have prolonged the scene into different stages, from winter to other seasons maybe, or from cold to coozy, in order to show some changes or the repition of her life. all in all well done.

[Emmy]

Thanks for the advice! I'll be sure to try that;)