Love

Love is a flower,
Beautiful and soft.
It's is delectate,
But stands for something strong.
With the right treatment,
It will grow well and last a long time.
With the wrong treatment,
It will wither and die.
All it takes to keep it going,
It a little time, patience, and kindness
And it will bloom into something wonderful.

Reviews

[Heather Burns]

a beautiful write Emmy. I like the message, length of poem and the presentation. I like this very much.

[Emmy]

Thank you! I was unsure on how the line "it will grow and last a long time" would turn out, because I didn't like the wording, but I wasn't sure what else I could put.

[Tom]

Simply done but no less beautiful for it !

Well penned !

[Emmy]

Thank you;)