Time disappears

It's that poem for your special someone, no matter who it is. It may not rhyme like I wish I could have made it, but I ended up more than happy with it

Time is gone.
It left me long ago,
The night I saw you,
Dressed in white.
Simple, yet so perfect,
Like a pink speck
In a lake of red.

What was I?
Who was I?
To ever compare?
I'll never have an answer!
How could I ever deserve
The heart you gave me?

Why would you?
How could you?
Think I was worth saving?
I was nothing,
But you made me something.
Love has a new name,
And it is yours.

Reviews

[maiarusm]

Very special indeed. I had a bit of a hard time reading it since it kept running with no spaces, but it still is very beautiful. Whoever it is dedicated to must be very happy and proud.

[Emmy]

Thank you! I'll try separating it some.;)

[wordman]

and a special poem it is for your special one