From the Start

Inspired from the "Unseen" series

From the start, I knew the difference

Between diff'rent people in this world

Those who sought truth and saw the light

From those who stumbled through

 

From the start, I knew I was rare

But not in a good way I feel

I see more in each passing day

Than most ever see through their eyes

 

From the start, this curse I've known

This unwanted talent of mine

A fleeting thought, a new idea

That separates me from the norm

 

From the start, I've known all along

Companions are not meant for me

The way I speak, the way I live

Foreign to all those around

 

From the start, I've felt an ache

Deep within my wandering soul

An emptiness sthat can't be filled

Isolation from this "talent" unearned

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this poem it is lonely though.. the talent i was thinking it was being pyschic.. i do know the feeling of not feeling as if i belong .. talent though is not the problem lol ..i do a good imitation of Ellen dancing though lol ..

I enjoyed reading you again, beautiful and thought provoking.

Chloe
xoxo

[Windsong]

Mmmm...I agree that not all talents are wantingly possessed. Great job on capturing this character's emotions.

[Amor-de-angel]

It felt kind of sad...but very beautifully expressed.

[Jillian Alexis]

Beautifully penned Kandi. You gave the reader many thoughts to ponder on. This write shows the great ability you have for conveying your' feelings. Exceptional job...Hugz...Jillian