The Unknowns
A Book by Luix Rives
Sixteen year old Gabriel Luis is top ranked in the martial arts circuit but after thwarting a robbery and attempted kidnapping, an opportunity is given between Gabriel Luis and the Unknown.
© 2016 Luix Rives
Author's Note
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Please provide feedback on strengths and weaknesses. I am mainly looking for overall story. I am aware I need work on grammer on some areas but if you see something that sticks out please let me know. I hope you enjoy my story as I had fun creating it. Thank you!!
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Author
Luix RivesLas Vegas, NV
About
I have countless dreams and an endless imagination that I want to share. I enjoy writing stories and making something that I can say, yeah that was me :)~
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