Sapno ka jahaan

taro se bhari haseen raat ko,

khule aasmaan k neeche sona,

acha lagta hai...

beech beech me aankhe khol,

toote taare ka intezaar kr,

dil ki khwahisho se milna,

acha lagta hai...

panchio k chehchahane pe,

aankho k khulte hi,

foolo ka manzar dekhna,

acha lagta hai...

Khuli hawa me saans lekar,

khushboo ko mehsoos krke,

dil ko jagana,

acha lagta hai...

subah ko uthte hi,

aazaad hawa se milke,

khud se baate krna,

acha lagta hai...

azaad panchio k neeche,

jharno se banti us jheel me,

dupkia lagana,

acha lagta hai...

Kaash reh jaati me,

hamesha yahi pe,

yeh sochte hi, dil me lehar ka uthna,

acha lagta hai...

Author's Note

Ek kalpana, jo kbhi to sach hogi....

Reviews

[Happy hours]

bahut hi khubsurat.. :) keep writing.

[Riti Rajput]

bahu bahut Shukriya :) :)

[Nature]

Wonderful. Being a Hindi poem writer, I would say you are amazing. Lot of things can be learned by someone like you.

Best Lines were-

Khuli hawa me saans lekar,
khushboo ko mehsoos krke,
dil ko jagana,
acha lagta hai.

[Riti Rajput]

Thank you soooo much... such appreciations are a great motivation... :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Its nice and gives a good feeling while reading...........keep writing.......tc..

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for reviewing my poem dear... :) :) :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Aur aisi ek kavita padhna bhi utna hi acha lagta hain...
very nice thoughts dear, i wonder it comes true with me too...
thanks for sharing...
u r really awesome to write this wonderful poem,
like u so much as a best friend...

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks dear friend for liking my poem... I am also glad to be a friend of yours... :) :) :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

A beautiful kavita. Close to nature and lost in its beauty
A few spellings need to be corrected such as "intezar", "panchiyo".
Very lovely

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for your review and thanks for correcting my mistakes... :)