Bird without wings

Blown Away with the Wind

I was moving reason lessly...

No direction, No destination

I was in me carelessly...

I was like a free bird

and My world was Sky...

Humming and Funning here n there

I could spread my wings n Fly...

My nest was on a tree

and I was actually Free...

Till the time, the rules of so called society

were burdened over me...

I can't understand society

and want to live on MY rules...

Even if they think

I am among Fools....

Reviews

[Nature]

Amazing Riti. 'I was in me carelessly' amd the last para, surely I am going to use it while talking about, be yourself.

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks dear.. I am glad that you liked it... :) :) :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

We all yearn to be free but the shackles of society and customs will keep us imprisoned.
Very well expressed.

*shabeeh*

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks Shabeeh for liking and reviewing my poem... :)

[barleygirl]

Your poem expresses how I feel about your writing, which I expressed in my other review for you . . . it feels like there's a poet here with amazing imagination & freedom of expression, but you're twisting your words into a poetic form that doesn't work in places. It feels like you are choosing words to get the rhyme, for example. But if you threw away this need to write poetry in a certain form, then you would be throwing away the restraints of society described in this poem. You have a brilliant way of looking at the world, but I wish to see you just let go & write what you want, how you want.

[Riti Rajput]

Thank you so much for your reviews... :)

[sarik]

speechless

seriously, a great one..

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for reviewing Sarik..

[Riddhi]

I really liked his poem...It is so nice..Great work and thanks for sharing...

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks Riddhi..... for taking time to read and review on this poem....