Inside Beauty

I didnt knew the world was so beautiful, unless I discoverd the beauty inside me.

The world was so full of freaky people, that in counting them, I forgot the loving me.

I was trying to find the happiess out, in the fake world, and forgot the real me.

I always ran behind the success, but now I want to run behind a moment,

that I can remember, while taking the last breath of mine. 

I always looked for a hand, that I can hold and walk,

but now I have realised, no one's going to walk hand in hand after that juncture.

I wanna breathe, I wanna run, I wanna fly like a free bird.

I wanna love, I wanna express, I wanna feel like a little baby.

Now that I have started loving myself, I wanna go far with me.

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

hey riti.. once again a heart touching writing...it seems that u hv found out what life really is.. I m happy to read this, I could get a lot of new things to learn, always running behind something is not good. Aftr which we run, it runs even more far from us.. So just be happy yourself and the desired one will come to u.... actually, it doesn't happen always especially with me, I don't run behind success but I run behind relations, which I never wanna lose, and if I lose touch by staying still, I will lose my frndshp... its being a hard time for me...
thanks for the support within your story..
Anindita

[Riti Rajput]

Hi Anindita, thanks for reviewing, I am glad that you liked it....
But I do not agree with your saying that you will lose your friendship... Staying apart does't mean that we have lost our loved ones.... If s/he is your best friend, s/he will remain your best friend, no matter how far you are.. Think over it :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

me too hope so dear, thanks very much for making me remind once again. I know it always remains but along with that a fear resides too. I will never forget my friend but I don't know if my friend will miss me or forget me...
anyway, I m glad for ur support dear friend...

[Riti Rajput]

Any time dear..... just keep smiling and always stay positive.... :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

yep, glad to talk to u after a long time..

[Riti Rajput]

Same here dear... :)

[Happy hours]

we should love ourselves...great message and beautiful peom. :)
Thanks for sharing

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for reading and reviewing... :)

[mou]

True, If all the time , we are going to judge someone, then we have least time to appreciate them.Though, sometime world try to make us down,but if we keep our thoughts and heart,then one day,it will be compelled to bend its head.Nice writing

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for reviewing... :)

[Norman T]

I really loved the sentiments that you expressed in this poem. Taking simple pleasures in your own life and not striving to be superior to everyone else is almost lost these days. Your words could be a lesson for contentment.

Norman

[Riti Rajput]

Thank you soooo much for reviewing my poems.... Such reviews motivate me to write more...

[Deepak Belbase]

It's really a very beautiful Though!

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks dear... for your review...

[Deepak Belbase]

your welcome!