Trust and Will

I trust Eventuality

Live every bit of Now

Infinite in Prospect

Yet it seems somehow

The Over and Over and Over

Looks very much the same

Until I will the Universe

To switch around the Game

Author's Note

Cleaning out the house, and came across this one from 2012. It applies even more now, as I am switching up the game these days...

Reviews

[M Edward H]

Succinct and positive. I like your sense of the reality of the present and the idealism of a promise of a better tomorrow if you wish to make it so.

[Motherless]

I like this it's very good. You describe how we learn to trust and try to live in the moment as much as we can until we get sick of the ho-hum and make things change. Well done!

[Haseo]

hello,

I liked the poem very much but I have Two notes, First you kept the rhyme for the first Four lines then you dropped it in the rest.
2nd, instead of "The Over and Over and Over" you should write "the over and over and again" in my personal opinion it would keep up with the rest.

its great work and I would love to read more

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for your comments, Haseo. I stuck with a rhyme pattern, but I know the syllable rhythm is off a bit. I will have i revisit this...