Haiku

Haiku

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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The seasons bicker

siblings with opposing views

Spring now gets her turn

© 2015 Rita L. Sev


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Winter still busking in the streets here Rita - love the thought of them as being opposites, never thought of it that way before, Kudoa, my friend.
:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Winter did hang on here, but this week we turned the corner. I hope Spring finds you soon, Anto! Th.. read more
Rita, I love this Haiku. It anthropomorphizes Mother Nature and the seasons' naughtier character traits. Very nice! It made me laugh. Anyone with children will love this...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Star! I had sibling rivalry on my mind, since the other day it was "National Sibling Day".. read more
Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

Ha-ha!....You are right. Perfect timing...:)
And I'm very glad of it. Good haiku.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Me too... Thank you, Marie.
well a great write,my sibblings and I never had any falling outs
they was a lot older

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Wordman. :)
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
oh this is clever.....makes me think of my sister and me...

and that means never budging...sort of like winter would not budge to let spring come in this year.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Exactly - there are still too many cold days for my liking... but today, it seems, Spring won... Tha.. read more
Really nice piece, wonderful spring:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Jamestown!
Lovely :) it is a big of a spat in between isn't it? :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Especially this time of year, with chilly mornings and warm, sunny afternoons. Thanks, Sophie!
At last! :)
Winter has been much too long!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Agreed! :)

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Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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