Haiku

The seasons bicker

siblings with opposing views

Spring now gets her turn

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

Winter in the east and the Midwest was a b***h this year. And as I grow older, they seem to get
harsher and harsher. Truth be told, you can't hide the color of it nor romanticize the inflexible ultraconservative
nature of a Nor'easter . I tell my friends who live on the West coast that their missing out
on the greatest controversy that nature has to offer. When the seasons rumble, then
clash into each other.

Haiku is something I dare not even attempt. But I agree to it's brief loveliness.

dana

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for your insights, Dana. Yes, with each passing year the winters seem harder - but I know no other way to experience Winter, and as strange as this may sound, I think I would miss the cold...

[h d e rushin]

It's kinda scary to admit it, but I think I would too rita..

[Devanshu Rajput]

I picked, this from your list, because I found the notion of a Haiku fascinating.

This haiku is a spot on!

I have also tried some haiku, but in vain. I have learned many things from this.

Thanks for sharing.

Warmest regards,
Devanshu

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Devanshu! Keep working on haiku - they are a lot of fun! :)

[Neville]

It does not take a lot of words at all
to capture the very essence
of the rivalry that exists
between summer, winter, spring and fall

You nailed it here Rita
All Good Things, N

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Neville! :)

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely...............................N

[Lyn Anderson]

How great. I love it. Again.

[Rita L. Sev]

Mother Nature gives us so much fodder... :) Thanks, KL - glad you enjoyed.

[Isabel25]

"Seasons bicker"- that is something that never occurred to me. I have always come across pieces where the seasons take their turns smoothly, even poetically. But this portrays that picture from a very different angle. And it is a very interesting one too :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Annie. I wrote this during a week when it still felt like winter here, though the calendar said spring - it was like a stubborn child refusing to give up her turn - and then, she finally does! :)

[icelandicblue]

WaHoo! It is about time I say. You've given us hope, now let's make sure the weather cooperates.

[Rita L. Sev]

This week was springtime-beautiful - Keep it coming! Thanks for stopping by, Blue!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha! perfect haiku Rita!! the incontestable event ... seasonal sibling rivalry .. love this one Rita! spot on! and in an instant the weather changes ... AGAIN!!!!!! arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh!
E.

[Rita L. Sev]

I am basking in warm weather today, and hoping it holds for tomorrow... Thanks E!

[Brittany Zedalis]

Bickering seems to fit perfectly for the weather around where I live.

[Rita L. Sev]

Some days it's a pretty loud argument, isn't it? ;)

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I enjoyed this very much as I could see the four siblings arguing over their schedules. I am happy spring gets her turn for winter was brutal here.

[Rita L. Sev]

Here too... But, Mother Nature gives all her kids their time. :) Thank you, FT!

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A great way to describe it... you are welcome :)

[Perkele.7885]

Very nice turn
Very good common sense
Very good, no check that, excellent content!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you kindly, Sir!