Unsatisfied Haiku

In harsh light of day

seek the stars… then in darkness

long only for dawn

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no matter what time of life it is, we will want something different...

the life of the never satisfied poet...give me whatever it is i don't have.

[Rita L. Sev]

Some days I am most thankful for all I don't have... :) Thanks, Jacob!

[ANTO]

Yep - never satisfied - that about sums up the human race at the minute my talented friend. I like the 'circular'/doughnut shape - making the reader go round and round in an endless loop.
Cool penning Rita !!
:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Anto! By the way, love the new pic. New puppy?

[Jamestown]

Few words, much meaning!
Love it:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you kindly, Jamestown!