Flawed on Purpose

Flawed on Purpose

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Polarized imperfect,

With sour notes and sweet

Ironically impermanent;

Forever incomplete

A constant work in progress,

A sculpture unrefined

Embracing the rough edges;

These flaws are by design

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
To illustrate this little poem, I'd like to note that after writing it, I stood up and saw that I had been sitting on a peanut M&M...

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The princess and the peanut M&M! Beautifully flawed we are and shall remain. Love what you said in the poem and the typeface you used for the e's. You are so very clever.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Blue. Sometimes working on the flaws is an uphill climb, but perhaps that's meant to keep.. read more

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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