Sad, Sad Deirdre Jane

Deirdre Jane laughs all the time

She always has a joke

But shadows lurk within her soul,

Unseen to many folk

 

Those who know her often note

Her smile, sunshine-warm

But never see behind closed doors

The harbored, black-cloud storm

 

If you are friends with Deirdre Jane

Look past her proud veneer

Remember that things rarely are

As we wish them to appear

Reviews

[Frieda P]

You always nail the emotion tenfold Rita, yes many Deidre Jane's out there, and we're none the wiser, until something tragic happens. Excellent, pen'd in your own unique voice....

[Rita L. Sev]

We all know her, sadly. Thank you, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Or a few, was my pleasure Rita....