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1/27/2020
2:02 PM U.S.A. MST
This review content authored by PB Jacobs.
My review content of "Grasping Twilight," by Rita L. Sev.
Ya, know, Rita, I can't go by what I see in your picture. If I do, it won't be a description. Yeah, yeah, just out and about mausering cocktail hour. And yes, when interacting with you, I think it's better to ignore my first thoughts, and do like you say, and simmer! I get this, your Walt Disneyness!
So, you whipped something up, I see... Nah, I don't look at you as a box of Instant Mascot Breakfast Cereal! I'm a live type, silly!
So who, or what is the main character in your content, Rita? Or, is it more of a pay attention to what is in front of me thing? Ah, it's a learn communication for dummies! Yay! I think I have a review slant of your content, Rita! Be a dummy, to not be a dummy! I'll bet I'm in the ballpark, Rita.
A cosmic starburst of a thought...
I'll bet you hate being mascotted...
Alright, enough of me. If you would, comment and let me know what's what with this content. I can't guess, as I'll be wrong, either way, unless I ask you...
Such a powerful poem. I especially loved the innocence depicted in the first line, and the lines "I daydream in the twilight, while grasping sun and clouds and stars..". I love how the last line can be perceived in different ways. Is it witchcraft? Is it the sadness of lost youth? I love the way it ends, leaving us wondering. Beautiful lines. Thank you for sharing. X
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your words, Rhea. I'm so glad you got something from these lines.
wheeeew!... it felt warm and light, yet powerful and heavy at the same time.. contrast of deeper meanings and such beautiful imagery.. oh how I love your writing... in is in those moments that creates, destroys, teaches, pleases, and hold so much meaning, yet they are fleeting, and at the same time unforgettable.. the same way you said so much with so little, you can start the day naive and in such a short amount of time become-- older, wiser, with more baggage.. but, keep grasping for the stars and let the dreams rule the heart, because anything is possible:)
amazing writing..
Posted 9 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
:) Wish you could see my smile at your generous review, April! I have been struggling to find my Mus.. read more:) Wish you could see my smile at your generous review, April! I have been struggling to find my Muse these days, and your words make me want to keep looking. Thank you!
"I day-dream in the twilight"... This is an incredible piece for so many reasons. This is truly a poet's poem... My pen hand doesn't know to applaud or take notes first!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Travis. Your words are appreciated more than you could know...
PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE "FRIENDING" ME:
I am happy to be sharing my poems (and occasional stories) and thrilled to be reading fellow authors.
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