Offbeat

A day with no laughter

or some kind of mirth

would certainly be incomplete

That’s why I’m so silly

and find every smile

Life’s so much more fun

played offbeat

Author's Note

Yep. :)

Reviews

[s y e]

Oh man, I just love you... hahaha, you make me laugh.

[Rita L. Sev]

Keep it silly, Noodle!

[Matching Socks]

Yep. :)
'Nuff said.

(Love the accompanying pic)

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Who better than Animal to illustrate this concept? Thanks, Ance!

[Debbie_Philly]

Very very true !!! Love it !!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Glad you enjoyed! Thanks!

[kublakhan27]

You are a breath of fresh air my friend, especially as it pertains to this place haha Not that this piece isn't without its wisdom, with positivity considered offbeat...that says something about today's world I think, but it definitely doesn't damper the spirit of your words...cool piece Rita :)

[Rita L. Sev]

I think I am both positive, and "off" - my thoughts go in weird directions... :) Thanks, Steve!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

and the way it should be:

Life’s so much more fun
played offbeat

and if it was in order --- there would be no fun in it...after all...

[Rita L. Sev]

Completely agree... Life needs to be a little messy now and then! Thank you, Glen!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[B-poet]

This a catchy & uplifting stanza you've put together here Rita. Great Work. An enjoyable & upbeat read. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks so much, BP!

[†Tracey†]

Offbeat is best...that's true living.. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed it is! Thanks, Tracey!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Sweet advice from a happy camper! Thanks Rita!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Alfred! :)

[A. Amos]

I agree with you on this one, some people take it too serious. As always chill-out write.

[Rita L. Sev]

Life is too bizarre to take too seriously... Thanks, A!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Frieda P]

I simply adore your sense of humor Rita...good message, that graphic is too funny! You're pretty much 'upbeat' 24/7.....! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

I try... :) People around me are certainly fodder for laughter, after all... ;) Thanks, Frieda!