Plastic Perfection

Plastic Perfection

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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As a girl I had great objection

To my Barbie doll’s girly perfection

When it seemed very plain

That she hadn’t a brain

I ditched the whole plastic collection

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Her head came off one day... there was nothing inside.

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Every time I pop by, you make me smile. This is definitely a winning little verse.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thank you, KL - I love to give a smile!
You made me smile and in your short write, I truly loved the message...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thanks so much, A!
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

Pleasure
Heh, I really like this. ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thank you, Brittany! Glad you enjoyed.
Lol so cute! Great job :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Kieta!
The author's note is priceless...I actually wrote a poem called Ballad Of Ken a couple of years ago when I heard he was being discontinued...apparently relationships are a bad example for young girls, unlike the dimensions that would make a real woman unable to walk...great observation Rita.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha - those dimensions! Poor Ken - he was never the right man for her... Thanks, Steve!
Barbie was never meant to be an intellectual, or even a physical standard to reach. I never played with Barbies, but I used to love making clothes for them, and I still would if I had time.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

My sister had most of the Barbies in our house, and she did have an extensive collection of clothes .. read more
I kinda like the curves,
and this cute poem.

Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! Barbie was never a very curvy gal... Thanks, Trace!
HA thanks, I needed a good larf today Rita....it's amazing how we mess girls up, isn't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

I really never 'got' the whole Barbie thing... to quote "...Greek Wedding", - I was a swarthy six-ye.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

No one does, therein lies the problem....
Cute little rhyme Rita. ...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Mark.

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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