Best Friend

Best Friend

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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If I could make my own best friend,

I’d mold her out of clay

She would bring out the best in me,

And lead me not astray

She’d never make petty demands,

Or shame me to contrition;

Her heart would beat in time with mine

And love, without condition

No matter what life had in store

She’d always sympathize

And see me as I truly am,

Without judgmental eyes

She’d celebrate the joys of life

And lift depression’s fog ~

I just realized, I have this friend ~

I’ve just described my dog!  J




© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
We can learn a lot from our dogs...

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So much fun, Thanks for the write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Streamline!
awe she's a beautiful dog! Very sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Star73!
star73

10 Years Ago

your welcome hun!!
Awww. Perfect. It is all so true. You also have a beautful dog there.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Mrs. G! :) Yes, she's a beauty - she hears that a lot!
he is a beautiful dog...i really like this poem...and while i was reading it i was singing the Jefferson Airplane song.."You're my best friend"--remember it? from the album "surrealistic pillow"?

too bad your pup can't read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Formally, Franklyn... named after Ben (you know, the Philly thing...) :)
jacob erin-cilberto

10 Years Ago

Frankie and Johnny? Michelle Pffeifer was Frankie...very much a "girl"---:)
jacob erin-cilberto

10 Years Ago

ah yes, the philly thing...

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