Never Tease a Snowflake

You’re just a little snowflake ~

You can’t do anything!

Some silly, chilly H20 ~

What mischief could you bring?

 

So I taunted that one flake ~

I’d better make amends ~

I hadn’t taken to account

The number of his friends! 

Author's Note

A snow day here in the Northeast - hope everyone stayed safe and warm!

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

What a very lovely piece. A little humour with all this bad weather.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, KL!

[Lydia Shutter]

Adorable! Just one snowflake is not imposing, but put him together with his family and friends and you could be housebound a while! Great rhyming. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Last week, that is exactly what happened! But, I do enjoy a snow day home from school, since my husband is a teacher, too ;) Thanks, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, that IS nice!

[Relic]

haha, excellent job. There was a raving mob here a couple of weeks ago. They'll probably be back too, I'll send them over to your place. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

No! No more! LOL! We have a warmer, rainy day here today, so it will finally go away. Thanks, Relic!

[Relic]

Lol It's raining here too btw.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

This was an incredible poem, very clever and friendly. Loved it!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, Gleb!

[Brett Moore]

I love this! It is fun and clever AND the type of poem that ends up in a children's book, making you some money! Great write!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you very much, Brett! A goal of mine to do that with some kid-friendly pieces! :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Beyond clever! Strength in numbers, gotta love this piece! 100 angry snowflakes! Lol

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! A lesson in teamwork - and in being nice to big teams! Thanks, Travis!

[Kimmie]

Ha, this made me laugh Rita. What a beautiful poem.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Kimmie! I am always glad to give a laugh! :)

[Renée]

lol !!! Oh a delightful sight ..but that is easy for me to say..when I am in California, my experience with snow is…drive up to the mountains and snow..stay… drive out of the snow ..
Hope you are warm and safe ! again…adorable poem !! ( :

[Rita L. Sev]

You have not really experienced snow until you have listened to the weather reports all night and waited to hear that all the schools are closed! :) Safe, and warm as long as we stay inside! Thanks, Renee!

[Renée]

I can imagine it would be delightful if one is prepared… Enjoyed your write completely !

[Sheila Kline]

Cute, and oh so very true!! Father Winter has a way of getting back at us.....lol
He sends a zillion of those frozen bits of H20 when we wants to let off some cold steam.

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed - he and Mother Nature are always in control! Thanks Sheila!

[icelandicblue]

This is adorable. We got our extended vacation. Love the poem.

[Rita L. Sev]

We went in on Thursday, had off on Friday... a one-day work week... LOL! But, back to the grind tomorrow! Thanks, Blue!

[icelandicblue]

Oh we chickened out and missed both days. Tomorrow is going to come very fast!