Never Tease a Snowflake
A Poem by
Rita L. Sev
***
You’re
just a little snowflake ~
You
can’t do anything!
Some
silly, chilly H20 ~
What
mischief could you bring?
So
I taunted that one flake ~
I’d
better make amends ~
I
hadn’t taken to account
The
number of his friends!
© 2014 Rita L. Sev
Author's Note
A snow day here in the Northeast - hope everyone stayed safe and warm!
Reviews
An adorable poem! Such a delight to read!
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Julie!
This is so whimsical, I love it! I also end up with the snowy, northeast conditions, but I thank the little flakes for the great skiing conditions.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is so whimsical, I love it! I also end up with the snowy, northeast conditions, but I thank the little flakes for the great skiing conditions.
10 Years Ago
Ha! Yes, they do have a purpose when they all come at once! Thanks, Gracie - glad you liked this!
hahahaha, I really like this.
Posted 10 Years Ago
hahahaha, I really like this.
10 Years Ago
:) Thanks, Brittany - glad you enjoyed!
Snow joke, you really did bring a smile to my face with this one. Cheers on a chilly day, All Good Things, N
Posted 10 Years Ago
Snow joke, you really did bring a smile to my face with this one. Cheers on a chilly day, All Good Things, N
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Neville! Always glad to give a smile!
10 Years Ago
My pleasure entirely, N
Had to laugh when I read this clever little poem. Bet you've seen a lot of his friends up in PA so far this winter. It's gotten cold here, but we rarely see snow. I miss it. I'm glad you can find a way to make light of it. Words seem to come so easy for you. I always enjoy visiting your page.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Had to laugh when I read this clever little poem. Bet you've seen a lot of his friends up in PA so far this winter. It's gotten cold here, but we rarely see snow. I miss it. I'm glad you can find a way to make light of it. Words seem to come so easy for you. I always enjoy visiting your page.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Damien; so glad to give a laugh! I enjoy snow the first few times in a season, but by March,.. read more Thanks, Damien; so glad to give a laugh! I enjoy snow the first few times in a season, but by March, I've had enough!
This is very cute...you have a unique ability to see whimsy in such things.
Very nice Rita.
Scott
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is very cute...you have a unique ability to see whimsy in such things.
Very nice Rita.
Scott
10 Years Ago
The greatest lesson my father taught me: Everything has humor in it. Thanks, Scott!
10 Years Ago
:)
Scott....
Yep his or hers friends might bring in a land fall record lol:) I loved this:) I swear you're a great pick me up in times Rita :) You come by in all the right moments with a review and I end up with a surprise before my eyes and cant stop reading:) That's pretty awesome my dear friend:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Yep his or hers friends might bring in a land fall record lol:) I loved this:) I swear you're a great pick me up in times Rita :) You come by in all the right moments with a review and I end up with a surprise before my eyes and cant stop reading:) That's pretty awesome my dear friend:)
10 Years Ago
Tank you for such kind words, Jon! You know I am always so glad to make you smile!
10 Years Ago
Welcome Rita:) Yeah I am too my dear friend Lord blessed you with great gifts:)
10 Years Ago
Ill catch up more soon not feeling so great.
Very witty... stay warm and snug.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Very witty... stay warm and snug.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Sharonlee - much warmer today!
Haha Snowflakes make good friends cause they are all unique:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Haha Snowflakes make good friends cause they are all unique:)
10 Years Ago
...And they stick together! Great to see you, Shaun!
10 Years Ago
That they do:) Thanks, great to see you as well:)
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Rita L. Sev Philadelphia, PA
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