Never Tease a Snowflake

Never Tease a Snowflake

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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You’re just a little snowflake ~

You can’t do anything!

Some silly, chilly H20 ~

What mischief could you bring?

 

So I taunted that one flake ~

I’d better make amends ~

I hadn’t taken to account

The number of his friends! 

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
A snow day here in the Northeast - hope everyone stayed safe and warm!

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An adorable poem! Such a delight to read!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie!
This is so whimsical, I love it! I also end up with the snowy, northeast conditions, but I thank the little flakes for the great skiing conditions.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, they do have a purpose when they all come at once! Thanks, Gracie - glad you liked this!
hahahaha, I really like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Brittany - glad you enjoyed!
Snow joke, you really did bring a smile to my face with this one. Cheers on a chilly day, All Good Things, N

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Neville! Always glad to give a smile!
Neville

10 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely, N
Had to laugh when I read this clever little poem. Bet you've seen a lot of his friends up in PA so far this winter. It's gotten cold here, but we rarely see snow. I miss it. I'm glad you can find a way to make light of it. Words seem to come so easy for you. I always enjoy visiting your page.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Damien; so glad to give a laugh! I enjoy snow the first few times in a season, but by March,.. read more
This is very cute...you have a unique ability to see whimsy in such things.
Very nice Rita.

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

The greatest lesson my father taught me: Everything has humor in it. Thanks, Scott!
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott....
Yep his or hers friends might bring in a land fall record lol:) I loved this:) I swear you're a great pick me up in times Rita :) You come by in all the right moments with a review and I end up with a surprise before my eyes and cant stop reading:) That's pretty awesome my dear friend:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Tank you for such kind words, Jon! You know I am always so glad to make you smile!
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10 Years Ago

Welcome Rita:) Yeah I am too my dear friend Lord blessed you with great gifts:)
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10 Years Ago

Ill catch up more soon not feeling so great.
Very witty... stay warm and snug.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sharonlee - much warmer today!
Haha Snowflakes make good friends cause they are all unique:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

...And they stick together! Great to see you, Shaun!
Shaun Payton

10 Years Ago

That they do:) Thanks, great to see you as well:)

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Philadelphia, PA



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