I Still Believe

On

Christmas

Eve, the sky we

spied; in morning’s

light, we’d be wide-eyed

Just what we’d wanted was under

our tree; it must have been Santa ~

who else could it be? As for the stockings,

he’d filled up each one, then ate up the cookies

when his job was done. Now some traditions may

not be the same, but that spirit of giving, I’ll never disclaim

Christmas yet fills me

with great joy, because…

I still believe in Santa Claus J

 

Author's Note

Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good write! ;)

Reviews

[redflutterby]

How did I miss this one?? Love the spirit behind it and the shape was perfect!!! ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

I was on a bit of a Christmas craze... ;) Thanks, Red!

[jane7z]

Loved the Christmas tree it gave me joy to see you write it out this way!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Jane! So jazzed that this gave you joy! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Awwwwww this is so adorable, Rita. Shape poems are not easy to write and you aced this....with rhyming that is flawless. Believing in Santa Claus is not childish...it is believing in the goodness of the universe and the magic of life. More people would be happy souls if they believed. I liked this a lot. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Like the old "Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus..." - goodness is worth believing in. Thanks, Lydi!

[Cassie]

A good write, you still believe in Santa claus...lol, I loved this line some traditions may not be the same but the spirit of giving....Thank you for sharing this, merry Christmas and blessed year 2014

[Rita L. Sev]

I am a child at heart... Thanks, Cassie!

[Baby Ricochet]

It's good to believe. Merry Christmas Rita

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, it is... Merry Christmas, Mark

[NeiL ArandA]

The presentation was very unique. Perfect title like the christmas movie we watched " Polar Express "

[Rita L. Sev]

That's a sweet movie for this time of year! Thanks, Neil!

[Scott Metro]

Clever...warm....expressive.


Enjoyed.
Scott

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Scott - glad you enjoyed.

[Scott Metro]

:)
S......

[Tom]

A fabulous festive poem, penned around a Christmas tree !

Splendid Rita, I hope Santa-Claus brought you everything your creative and wholesome heart desired !

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Tom! :) Merry Christmas!

[Pryde Foltz]

It was so wonderful to experience this through my sons eyes. Such an amazing time.

[Rita L. Sev]

Having kids in your life makes Christmas sparkle just a bit more... Merry and happy, Pryde!

[s y e]

beautiful Rita - merry christmas!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you! Merry and happy to you!