First Snow

Surrounded by

the sweetest dream,

vanilla topped

with dense whipped cream

A novel view

for just one day,

tomorrow it’s just

grey on grey

Author's Note

Had the first snowfall of the season yesterday. It was so pretty... yesterday... :)

Reviews

[Saumya]

oh..how sweetly wonderful words you placed here Rita:)
winter is always one of my favorite seasons, due to many reasons, but snowfall is one of those major this which makes it favorite for me:)
and you have described winter beautifully well here my friend:)
enjoyed reading and reviewing your write::)
well done
and happy winters:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Saumya! Happy winter to you too - stay warm!

[Saumya]

oh.. you are very welcome Rita:)
love
saumya:)

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You took me back in time with that poem :) The days me and my grandma made snow cream:)

[Rita L. Sev]

That is such a cool memory! So glad this piece brought it to you. Thanks, Jon!

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Yep cool memory miss those days,Your welcome Rita:)

[icelandicblue]

There is no weather magic like that first snow. it never ceases to amaze me. Thank you for making me realize how much I appreciate it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Even the trash cans look pretty... :) Thanks, Blue!

[s y e]

I want snow. :( We had thunder and lightening here tonight, I loved it! But I want a beautiful white Christmas, ahaha - a girl can dream?

[Rita L. Sev]

We have now had two snows in one week - making up for last winter, when we go none at all. A white Christmas is a beautiful dream!

[Tom]

Indeed the first snowfall always paints an enchanting picture of winter's wonderland!

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes - but by the second, and third... enough is enough! :) Thanks, Tom!

[Sami Khalil]

Congratulations on your first snow and the novel view of nature . I hope you know how to make a snow man...I like how you made this sound so sweet as if looking at vanilla - topped dreams...Bravo.......................

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sami - yep, been making snowmen all my life... :)

[Sami Khalil]

A class to be taught now...Just kidding...:)
You are welcome...:)........................

[Anand Sehgal]

serenity is ephemeral, but the impact is eternal :) lovely write :)

[Rita L. Sev]

So true! Thank you, Anand!

[Marie]

I'm sure it was very pretty...that kind of purity just can't last...

[Rita L. Sev]

True... Thanks, Marie.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When I lived in Pa I could't wait for the first snow fall.
A real pretty short piece.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Dale. We had no snow at all last year, so Mother Nature is starting early this year...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

She is a fickle lady.

[Jack...]

I saw that snow Rita. I was watching the Eagle's game. It was so very beautiful and it added up quickly. I hear it is snowing again today in your neck of the woods. Very nicely penned.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Jack - yep, it snowed on the Eagles, and they won. How's that for a good luck charm? More snow today gave us a day off from school, so I am back to loving the white stuff... ;)