Spice

Spice

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Pumpkin spice coffee

and pumpkin spice cream

pumpkin spice donuts ~

I’m seeing a theme

pumpkin spice cupcakes

with pumpkin spice tea

we’re going too far

with this pumpkin-y-spree

pumpkin spice toothpaste

and pumpkin spice wine ~

next they’ll put pickles

in pumpkin spice brine

I guess it’s just Fall;

it’s the pumpkin’s main stint…

next month everything

will be Christmas-y mint.

 

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Seriously. Toothpaste.

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Ha...seems they beat any idea to death now a days. Personally I'm a French vanilla girl..pumpkin spice only appeals to me in the form of pie. But give me a cup of french vanilla tea and I'm in heaven. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I like the pie best too - as for coffee, I'm a purist - strong black coffee flavored coffee! :)
It all sounds good to me...even the toothpaste. Very cute and quite seasonally correct Rita.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

The toothpaste is where I draw the line... I am a traditionalist when it comes to toothpaste! :) Th.. read more
Ha! I was getting hungry until... Your writing just feels so relaxed and easy, Rita. I imagine words dripping from your pen. Pumpkin spiced words! Ha! Very fun read. I enjoyed. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Angi - you know how it is - some days the words flow, other days... :)
He-he, you make me smile. I agree, too. I've had some of those pumpkiney drinks, and don't much care for them. Pumpkin bread or muffins, and pumpkin pie--those are where I like the taste of pumpkin. Maybe we should give mint some competition and promote the flavor of mistletoe for Christmas.....oh, wait...I think that's poison.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! I'll bet it would catch on, though - Mistletoe Kisses - LOL! Glad to give a grin, Sam! Thanks .. read more
You know something?--I don't care much for punpkin or mint.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

LOL! You are wise to avoid these fad flavors. Marie!
Personally I prefer the Christmas-y mint, but the pumpkin and cinammon is here to stay this time of year. Very cute write, Rita. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I do enjoy a candy cane in my hot chocolate... :) Thanks, Lydi!
I can smell christmass from a distance but pumpkin in everything nah!!!! especially toothpaste, that would set everyone throwing up. This is a good read

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I agree about that toothpaste - it just sounds wrong! Thanks, Cassie!
I have said this before...In Britain we don't have this Pumkin fetish, though, like everything American, it is GROWING on our side of the ocean. Each year the stores are becoming more and more wrapped up in the whole Halloween experience. Pumkins will be the next thing. So far all we do is make Jack o lanterns...Some bright spark is gonna say one day...HEY...In the States they actually EAT that stuff, and we will all no doubt be HOOKED.
Fantastic poem girl, as per usual from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I do think you would enjoy pumpkin pie - it is delicious! But for the love of God, keep the pumpkin.. read more
Dr. Wood ?

11 Years Ago

I'll set up road blocks
I have a friend who insists on getting herself a pumpkin spice latte every single day during the fall. This is a very witty and humorous look at the trend-driven society that we live in. It had a bouncy rhyme scheme with a very unique rhythm and structure that I adore. Well done, Rita!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Will - you should share this with your friend! LOL!
Really... You nailed it.
I hate trendy flavored crap. Makes me not want to eat or drink any of it.
I guess as long as there is no sugar, or alc. and it has fluoride, the toothpaste would work. Yuk!
Funny though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I don't mind the flavor, but it gets to bee ridiculous - signs everywhere that "We have Pumpkin Spic.. read more

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