This is a beautiful tribute. Daring to dream, daring to think, daring to say those things that no one wishes to hear, daring to expose the ugly, the neglected, the forgotten. We dare with every line and the precipice becomes steeper, the air thinner. It is what makes us feel alive.
Yes indeed, this is very beautiful! You are so right about all poets, we dream and write and the passion shines through.
Love the rhyme, flow and imagery you created here.
The second verse is my favourite!
Well now, what can I say here that's hasn't already been said? This is a much-needed breath of fresh air, a moment to stop and take stock of the whole situation...to say this is inspiring would be wildly obvious...it's like having someone tell you that it's all worth the trouble you know? Beautiful work Rita, and a pretty ingenious form to boot ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, K. This was fun to write, I think because I was inspired by all of you wonderful poets!
11 Years Ago
Be sure to count yourself in my friend....you know we love you as well ;)
Love the tempo and movement of this piece, each verse kept the heartbeat/melody intact. very cool my friend. This one was as easy to sing as it was to read. I'll give you an A+ on this one.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, Jack - so glad you liked this one (as you are one to whom it was dedicated) :)
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