Sweeter

Sweeter

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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senryu

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If you can focus

on the taste of one berry

life will be sweeter

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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Sounds perfect Rita, till that berry squirts you in the eye...I know don't rain on your parade, just saying..... ;-) Like this one muchly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I only have that problem with grapefruit, and they are kind of mean fruits anyway... :) Thanks, Frie.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, that must have been my problem, wrong fruit! ;-)
good philosophy here...because most people can't do this...they just look for more berries...we need to love the one we're with, love the job we are doing now, love whatever it is we are doing..and not always look for more. greed does not contentment bring.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Exactly. Mindfully living in the now... Thank you, Jacob!
So very true. You amaze me Rita...I'll bet you are a fantastic teacher. I know I learn a lot from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Jack - these simple lessons are the hardest to get through...

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Tags: Life, sweetness, simplicity

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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