Positive?

This one is Frieda's fault... :)

People think it’s wonderful

that I sneeze out happy rainbows

but believe me it’s distracting,,

blowing colors from my nose

Being followed by the sunshine

that makes my outlook bright

gives me awful sunburn

and it keeps me up at night

And oh, what I could tell you

of excreting unicorns ~

I’m sure you can imagine,

when you think about those horns…

Author's Note

Yes, I have a positive outlook. But there is a downside... ;P

captcha: bullism :)

Reviews

[rhythm&blues]

Very funny indeed, the image is perfect for this one. Put a big smile on my face today.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, R&B. Always glad to spread silliness!

[Troy Henson]

Your rhyming flows very well making the read so delightful:)
The good with the bad in a comical fashion. Great job

Regards
Troy

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you! I appreciate your words!

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rita. A delightful and imaginative write. I love rhyming poetry and you do it so well and with a heartfelt message. I love it. Thanks for sharing.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Shelley!

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome Rita.

[Cassie]

hahahahaha very good poem with a fun side, nicely penned

[Rita L. Sev]

I am told I am a very positive person. Thought I should set the record straight that there are downsides to all this sunshine! Ha! Thanks, Cassie!

[Cassie]

You should keep on spreading that positive attitude here, you will see so many of us will start getting drawn to the positive attitude.

[Samuel Jack]

HAHAHA yes, positivity has a price, I think of it as a resource in your brain that can be used up, a bit like patience.
Great fun, and that animation is hilarious.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Thank you, Samuel! You are right about positivity being used up - sometimes I need a refill... :)

[K. Louis]

LOL! nice ending..your work so far, is uplifting..that's a good change. Power of positivity can do amazing things. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, K.L!

[Stella Armour]

haha... ouch!...................

[Rita L. Sev]

:) ............

[Aethereal]

It's good to get a little comic relief around here every once and a while. It seems the carnival has come to town. You did well with this comical poem. Great animation too! I like that cat.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Aethereal!

[ANTO]

This is brilliant craic Rita. Awesome (you too Frieda P.)
Hah hah. Thats wee cartoon is class.
More...more..
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[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Anto! Frieda found that cartoon, after much googling of "pooping unicorns". LOL!

[ANTO]

I should have known - haaaaa ha 'pooping unicorns' indeed ....lmao
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[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Funny!! Great job rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks, Mark.