My Cross

My Cross

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

Playing with forms again

"

Alone

in the

worry

that I cannot set right

all the struggles in the

hearts

of mine

Are my

actions

enough

to show

care, or

is this just

a   cross

  that I bear  

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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We worry too much. We must let God and The Lord work through us more often. Thats my opinion. Its not always easy to do, humans after all. Lol Nice work Rita, I realllllllyyyyyy like this one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Shaun! You are right, we have to do what we can and let God, or the Universe, take care o.. read more
Shaun Payton

11 Years Ago

You are welcome Rita. :)
i relate, right now there are so many things going on at once in my life that are worrisome...i just decided, i can't do anything about it...if i get the judas kiss..so be it...
what will be will be...

you did so well with this shape...

your experiments seem to be pretty successful...

when i try form stuff, it is usually an experiment that does not turn out too well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob. It takes me a while to get some of these; I'm glad this one seems to have worked. .. read more
Oh, I absolutely love, love, LOVE this!
I love the way you put it into the shape of the cross...
Breathtakingly beautiful!!
Excellent write, my precioius Sister in Christ!!
May I print it out and hang it in my kitchen, where everyone can see it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Angel! I worked so hard to get the cross shape, I was not sure if the words made sense. .. read more

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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